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一、审题立意
大学英语六级作文的题型一般是标题作文、主题句作文或情景、图表作文等等，去年六级作文考试有书信和记叙文，但基本都属于命题作文范畴。对于命题作文，审题立意是写好作文至关重要的一步。所谓审题，就是要看清题意，确定文章的中心思想和主题，并围绕中心思想组织材料。也就是通过分析作文题给出的标题、主题旬或情景，找出关键词或中心词，明确写作要求，是写哪方面的内容，既包括题材上的要求，也包括体裁上的要求。如果不审题就随便下笔，想一句写一句，内容离题，即使再好的再华丽的再精心构思的词句表达也无济于事。另一方面，六级写作的目的是测试学生用英语书面表达思想的初步能力，并不是测试你母语创作能力，而且为了便于作文评卷有一尽量统一的标准，出题方式无论怎样变化，六级作文都可以归纳为三段式，有的甚至给出三段的段首句。其目的就是让学生们在统一主题下的写作要点、思维和方式尽可能地同一化和统一化。鉴于此，我们应清楚六级写作没有太大的自由发挥空间。在构思段落之前一定要仔细斟酌标题、主题句和段首字，找出关键词从而确定写作的方向和范围，而且还应记住要尽量缩小这个范围，不能脱离要求任意展开，那样属于跑题。
二、段落构思
文章的段落，是文章的基本组成部分，一篇好的文章需要精心的段落构思和合理的段落安排，根据不同的题材确定不同的段落写作顺序。六级作文从结构上看，一般由三部分组成：引言部分(Introductory Part;展开部分(BodyPart);结尾部分(Ending Part)，而且每段往往只有一个主题，段中各支持句围绕明确的主题，层层展开论证并服务于主题句。整篇文章也是层层推进，环环相扣，条理分明，完整统一。下面进一步说明每一部分的具体写作技巧与要求：首先，引言部分Introductory Part
文章开头很重要，关系到全篇文章，一定要认真考虑好如何写好第一句。一般紧扣主题，开门见山，直接入题。如果已给出段首句，则要考虑如何跟开头连接好。在实际写作中，主要有以下几种开头方式。
定义法。即用一句话或几句话来解放说明题中的关键词，给出关键词的定义。多用于给出一简单题目的标题作文。直接切入主题。也就是直截了当地揭示文章的主题或写作原由，如已给出每一段的中文提示，可直接翻译提示中每一段的中心思想，作为开头。
提问法。用疑问句或设问句开头，紧接着提出自己对这个问题的看法或直接点明主题，这种方法如果使用得当，能够激起读者往下读的兴趣，以便找出答案。以故事背景开头，交待时间、地点、人物及背景，然后在这个背景下引出正文。这种方法多用于记叙文，使读者一开始就产生鲜明视觉形象。引用法。即引用名人名言或谚语等作为文章的开头，指出阅读的内容范围。
其次，主题部分Body Part
篇章写作不仅应层次清楚，而且主次也要分明I任何文章都有主体部分，即文章的精华部分。学生在这部分的写作错误五花八门，或者段落内容缺乏统一性，或者句与句之间缺少连贯性，层次混乱，信息的表达经常是跳跃式的想到什么写什么，内容空洞，言之无物，缺乏严密的逻辑性。针对这些错误，写主体段应注意以下几点要求。要紧扣开头段提出的主题思想，突出中心。围绕主题句用一组意思连贯而且完整的句子展开文章，切记各展开句是能起到说明、支持或阐述主题的句子并服务于主题，全文保持统一性，也就是我们通常所说的“切题”。主体段取材必须精练典型，系统而完整。根据内容需要和字数的规定，确定要点的详与略后，选择正确的、典型的、具有说服力的事实、例子、数据和论据等说明解释并扩充主题。主体段要与开头段和结尾段有内在的必然归宿，要顺其自然地过渡，使用好承上启下的连接词或句子，防止突然转折。另外，主体段的句与句之间也要逐步展开，通顺连贯，符合一定的逻辑关系。星火教育网
最后，结尾部分Ending Part
文章如何结尾关系到写作的成败。好的结尾不仅在形式上起到面龙点睛的效果，而且在内容上读者明其宗旨，解其寓意。一般结尾段的写法有以下几种;总结式，即在上文所述事实和论据的基础上，对全文进行归纳、总结得出结论，使读者对文章的主题或作者的观点有个更完整而清晰的理解。首尾呼应式，即对引言段所提出的同题给出解决方案，作到首尾呼应，主题突出，结构匀称，使读者对提出的问题有了明确的答案。提问式，这种结尾形式可以引起读者的思考。并起到强调主题的作用。展望式，也就是要提出作者的希望、号召或表示信心和决-C-，使读者受鼓舞。引语式，引用名人名言，谚语俗语做文章的结尾，使文章更具说服力。
Chapter One 文章开头句型
1-1 对立法 : 先引出其他人的不同看法,然后提出自己的看法或者偏向于某一看法,适用于有争议性的主题.
[1]. When asked about....., the vast/overwhelming majority of people say that ....... But I think/view a bit differently.
[2]. When it comes to .... , some people bielive that ....... Others argue/claim that the opposite/reverse is true . There is probably some truth in both arguements/statements , but (I tend to the profer/latter ...)
[3]. Now, it is commonly/generally/widely believed/held/acknowledged that .... They claim/ believe/argue that ... But I wonder/doubt whether.....
1-2 现象法 引出要剖析的现象或者问题, 然后评论 .
[1]. Recently the rise in problem of/(phenomenon of) ... has cause/aroused public/popular/wide/ worldwide concern.
[2]. Recently the issue of the problem of/the phenomenon of ...has been brought into focus. ( has been brouth to public attention)
[3].Inflation/Corruption/Social inequality ... is yet another of the new and bitter truth we have to learn to face now/constantly.
----- To be continued !!
1-3 观点法 ----开门见山,直接了当地提出自己对要讨论的问题的看法.
[1]. Never history has the change of .. been as evident as ... Nowhere in the world/China has the issue/idea of .. benn more visible/popular than...
[2]. Now people in growing/significant numbers are beginnig/coming to realize/accept/(be aware) that...[3]. Now there is a growing awareness/recognation ot the necessity to......Now people become increasingly aware/conscious of the importance of ......
[4]. Perhaps it is time to have a fresh look at the attitude/idea that.......
1-4 引用法 ----- 先引出名人名言或者有代表性的看法, 来引出文章要展开论述的观点!
[1]. \\\\\\\\\\\\\\\"Knowledge is power.\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\" such is the remark made by Bacon.This remark has been shared by more and more people .
\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\"Education is not complete with gradulation.\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\" Such is the opnion of a great American philosopher. Now more and more people share his opnion.
[2].\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\".........\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\" How often we hear such statements/words like thoses /this .
In our own days we are used to hearing such traditional complains as this \\\\\\\\\\\\\\\"......\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\".
1-5 比较法 ------ 通过对过去,现在 两种不同的倾向,观点的比较 , 引出文章要讨论的观点.
[1]. For years, ...had been viewed as ... But people are taking a fresh look now. With the growing ... , people ....... .
[2]. People used to think that ... (In the past, ....) But people now share this new.Chapter 2 文章中间主体内容句型
原因结果分析
3-1-1. 基本原因 --- 分析某事物时, 用此句型说明其基本的或者多方面的原因.
[1]. Why ... ? For one thing.. For another ...
[2]. The answer to this problem invovles many factors. For one thing... For another...... Still another ...
[3]. A number of factors , both physical and psychological affect .... /both individual and social contribute to ....
3-1-2 另一原因 --------> 在分析了基本原因之后, 再补充一个次要的或者更重要时用!
[1]. Another important factor is ....
[2]. ... is also responsible for the change/problem.
[3]. Certainly , the ... is not the sole reason for .....
3-1-3 后果影响 --------- 分析某事物可能造成的后果或者带来的影响 .
[1]. It will produce a profound/far-reaching effect/impact on....
[2]. In involves some serious consequence for ........
比较对照句型
3-2-1. 两者比较 ---> 比较两事物, 要说出其一超过另一个, 或肯定一事物的优点, 也肯定其缺点的时候用 !
[1]. The advantages gained from A are much greater than the advantages we gain from B.
[2]. Indeed, A carries much weight when compared with B.
[3]. There is no doubt that it has its negative effects as well as positive effects.3-2-2 . 两者相同/相似 ------> 比较两事物共同都有或者共同都没有的特点时用!
[1]. A and B have several thing in common. They are similar in that.....
[2]. A bears some sriking resemblance(s) to B.
Chapter Three 文章结尾形式
2-1 结论性--------- 通过对文章前面的讨论 ,引出或重申文章的中心思想及观点 .
[1]. From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that .....[2]. In summary/In a word , it is more valuable .......
2-2 后果性------ 揭示所讨论的问题若不解决, 将产生的严重后果.[1]. We must call for an immediate method , because the current phenomenon of ... , if allowed to proceed, will surely lead to the heavy cost of .......[2]. Obviously , if we ignore/are blind to the problem , there is every chance that .. will be put in danger.
2-3 号召性 -------- 呼吁读者行动起来, 采取行动或提请注意.
[1]. It is time that we urged an immediate end to the undesirable tendcy of ......[2]. It is essential thar effective measures should be taken to correct the tendency.2-4 建议性 -------- 对所讨论的问题提出建议性的意见, 包括建议和具体的解决问题的
方法.
[1]. While it cannot be solved immediately, still there are ways. The most popular is .... Another method is ... Still another one is .....[2]. Awareness/Recognition of the problem is the first step toward the situation.
2-5 方向性的结尾方式 ---- 其与建议性的唯一差别就是对问题解决提出总的, 大体的方向或者指明前景.[1]. Many solutions are being offered here , all of them make some sense, but none is adequate enough. The problem should be recognized in a wide way .
[2]. There is no quick method to the issue of .., but .. might be helpful/benefical.[3]. The great challenge today is ...... There is much difficulty , but ........
2--6 意义性的结尾方式 --------> 文章结尾的时候,从更高的更新的角度指出所讨论的问题的重要性以及其深远的意义!
[1]. Following these suggestions may not guarantee the success, but the pay off might be worth the effort . It will not only benefit but also benefit .....
[2]. In any case, whether it is posotive or negative, one thing is certain that it will undoubtedly ..
结尾万能公式1． 结尾万能公式一：如此结论
Obviously（此为过渡短语）, we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.
to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus
Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that…
2． 结尾万能公式二：如此建议
Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.
Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.
来源:考试大-英语六级考试
高考英语作文写作技巧
高考英语作文写作技巧
作文的时间
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? 你认为老师改高考作文需要多少时间？ 15S-30S 部分不负责任老师仅用10S左右 你认为你高考作文时间为多少分钟？需要至少20分钟去写作文，甚至半个小时 高考英语定理你用多少时间去做这道题，你就能得多少分！
高考英语高分策略
? 第一部分： 词！
? 第二部分： 句！
? 第三部分： 衔接！
? 第四部分： 套用！
NO.1书面词
? 希望：Hope→expectation ? 合作：cooperation
? 机会：chance→opportunity ? 汽车：car？？→vehicle
? 组织：organization ? 总是：always？？？→all the time ? 尽力：devote …to / make every effort to do / do one’s utmost（最最） to do
? 参观：visit / show sb. around(有人带领)/ catch a sight of
秘诀1：在作文中，尽量使用名词或以名词为核心的短语
NO.2 特色词
? 认为：think、insist、emphasize、persist（in）doing sth.
? I hold the opinion that….
? 喜欢:be fond of、be keen on、be interested in
? Be fascinated with
? 人：people？？→individual
? 如果： if、on condition that、provided that、
? assuming that
? 我爱你：ILOVEYOU ！
? 虽然土，但也只会这么说
? You are my red red rose!（男生版）
? You are the soul in my heart!（女生版）
秘诀2：尽量使用高三学习的词汇
NO.3 具体词
? 房子 ? 好男人
? House ? Good man??
? Responsible ? Apartment公寓
? Flat精品公寓 ? Aggressive上进的
? Villa别墅 ? Steady稳重的
? Mansion四合院 ? Humorous幽默的
? 因为
? Because of
第 1 页 共 5 页
? Thanks to 接好原因
? Owing to 接好原因
? Due to 坏原因
? 最想不到的词
? And→as well as→together with、along with
? By当通过的意思时：无条件用via替换
? Without无条件用with no替换
NO.4 替换词
? 班长
? Monitor监视器
? Class chief
? Class president
? The present of our class
? 好好学习，天天向上
? Good good study,day day up!
? The harder we weill study,themore progress we will make.
? 四大名著
? 西游记—A journal to the WEST
? 红楼梦—dream of Red mansion
? 三国演义—Romance of three kingdoms
? 水浒传—outlaws of Marsh land
? 孙子兵法Art of Wars
? 笑傲江湖The Hero of Heroes
作文中句子的取舍
不要以为自己学的很好，除非你GRE满分！
高考作文中，主要以简单句为主，复合句1-2句即可。
要记住：简单句并不简单！
试试吧！只用简单句翻译下面的句子
? 1、每年，都有很多大学生毕业。
? Everyyear,hundreds of thousands of college student graduated.
? 2、他们都想要工作.
? They long for finding jobs.
? 3、这些工作可以给他们高薪.
? The job can offer them considerable wealth.
? 4、这是不可能的。
? This seems impossible.
? 似乎挺简单？？将他们组合起来，一句话！
? Everyyear,thousands of thousands of college student graduate, after that ,they are eager to find jobs owing
to hand some salaries , but this seems impossible!
秘诀3：尽量在多个简单句当中穿插适当的过渡词
? 姓名：杨嘉梁
? 性别: 男
? 年龄：17
? 出生地：中国
? 爱好：篮球
? 所在学校：四中
Born in Chinese，YJL,a 17-year-old boy, is keen on playing basketball,having graduated from NO.4 Middle school.
简单句简单吗？你能写出这样的简单句吗？
高考作文中常见的加分句式
NO.1 引入名言警句
? Just as saying goes,”….”.
? I insist that a life with no friend is a life with no sun.
? Honesty and diligence should be youreternal mates.Benjamin Franklin
? Science to the human mind is what air orwater to the body.
NO.2 引入 IT
（1）it引导的形式主语句式
? It is + adj.+ for sb.+ to do sth.
? Adj.的要求：看不见，摸不着 只存在于主观价值判断中的词。
? 例如：vital 、indispensable 、tough 、valuable 、 beneficial
(2)It引导的强调句：It is(was)+被强调部分+that/who+简单句的其他成分（不能强调谓语动词） ? 秘诀4：尽量在作文中避免人称代词做主语的句式过多.
? 如何避免?
你学了被动语态夹馍馍的啊？？
NO.3 引入倒装句
（1）ONLY引导的倒装
? Only in this way…
（2）As引导的让步状语从句的倒装
? Adj/n/adv + as +主谓，+主句
NO.4 引入非限——作文具体化的法宝
NO.5 引入非谓
秘诀5：尽量在作文中使用二非
小词定乾坤——过渡词
必须必须必须必须必须必须学会的东西！
起
①目前，当前，现在：
? At present / presently/ currently
②首先，起初：
? At first / firstly /at the beginning of / Initially
③当谈到：
? Talking about , When asked about , When it comes to
承
①并列：
? at the same time , in the meantime , mean while , as well as
②递进：
? What’s more ,moreover , especially.
③补充（除此以外）：
? besides , in addition
转
①弱转折：
? while , whereas
②强转折：
? in contrast , on the countary
③坏→好：
? Fortunatly , Amazingly ,Surprisingly
④好→坏：
? Unfortunatly , All of a sudden
合
①结果，所以，因此：
? thus , hence , therefore ,as a consequence
②总之，综上所述：
? All in all , Above all , Taking everything into consideration
③依我而言:
? On a personal level, As far as I concerned , According to my viewpoint.
吃透大纲
一、评分原则：
? 1、评分时应根据文章的内容和语言初步确定所属档次，然后以该档次的具体评分标准衡量，确定
或调整档次，最后给分。
? 2、评分时，应注意的主要内容：内容要点，应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性，上下文连贯性
以及语言的得体性。
? 3、词数少于80和多余120的，从总分中减去2分。
? 4、拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应使其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英美
拼写以及词汇用法均可接受。
? 5、如书写较差，以及影响交际，将分数降低一个档次！
（二）具体评分标准
? 1、覆盖所有内容要点
? 2、应用较多的语法结构和词汇
? 3、语法结构或词汇方面有少许错误，但为尽量使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语
言应用能力
? 4、有效的使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑
? 5、完全达到了预期的写作目的
必须注意的
? 如果作文要求是：假如你是…..
? 如果不以第一人称写作，直接扣7分。
怎么拿高分？背范文，套用
应用文套用句型
? 1、It’s my honor to write a letter to you.
? 2、I would be much obliged to you if you could read my letter.
? 3、I beg to be in possession of this oppprtunity to inform you a letter.
? 4、I am writing to you in the hope that…..
? 5、It give me great pleasure to receive your kind letter(of+date)
? 1.I must make a sincere and humble thaks to you.
? 2.I’m looking forward to you early reply.
? 3.I do regret the trouble I’m causing you.
? 4.I do regret that I can’t give you a more favourite reply
? 5.Please accept my most cordial thanksfor your timely help,which I will never forget.
完形填空
? 根据近10年来高考题，答案只有两种可能:5555 5564
? 答案没有连续的，连续两个错误率50%，连续三个错误率95%
高考作文误区
? 高考语文有满分作文，也有零分作文
? 高考英语没有满分作文，也没有零分作文
? 你们觉得考研的作文平均分为多少？满分3012.XX
写作文技巧
一、提高认识事物和表达事物的能力。我国著名教育家叶圣陶先生指出：写任何东西决
定于认识和经验，有什么样的认识和经验，才能写出什么样的东西来。反之，没有表达认识的能力，同样也写不出好作文。
二、把认识结构作为作文的核心，包括学习知识，观察积累，记忆储存，训练思维，丰富
想象，培养情感，锻炼意志；从说到写，推敲修改，多读勤写。
三、树立大作文观，听、说、读、写有机结合
一要注重审题；二要明确写作目的，立意要新；三是选材要有根据；四要讲究谋篇技巧，安排好篇章结构；五要注意文章分段，事先列小标题，作文提纲；六要注重文章写法，因文用法；七要妙用语言，用思想调遣语言。
学会五种立意法：以事赞人，直抒胸臆，借物喻理，触景生情，托物言志。
四、作文大目标的逐年级分解：一年级字词，二年级句子，三年级片断，四年级篇章，五
年级综合，六年级提高。
五、实施五项训练
根据认识是作文的核心这一原则，围绕这个发展学生心理机制的核心，扎扎实实地进行了五项训练：
（一）、字词训练。学习掌握大量字词。掌握运用字词的金钥匙：联系自己熟悉的事物；
联系自己生活实际；联系自己学会的语言及字词知识。
运用十引说的方法，把字词学习与说话训练相结合。十引说是：1、分析字形；
2、利用教具；3、凭图学词；4、组词扩词；5、选词填空；6、词语搭配；7、调整词序；
8、触景用词；9、词语分类；10、联词成句。
丰富了说话训练内容，使自己积累大量会说会用的字词，为写作文打下坚实基础。
（二）、句子训练。只要是一个句子，都包括两个方面：一是说的人、事、物、景，
二是说目的。可有些教师指导学生说一句话时，没有很好凭借图画和事物，认真教学
生观察、认识、分析、表达的方法，只是拿出一张图或一事物让学生说写一句话，学
生不知道为什么要说写一句话，怎样说写一句话，说写一句什么句型、什么句式的话，
导致作文中语调单一、呆板、不活泼生动。可以改让学生凭图、看物、对话、练习说
写一句时间、地点、人物、事件四要素完整的话，四种句型，九种句式的话。学生
才会在作文中运用不同句型、句式，表达不同的思想、感情、态度、目的。
（三）、段的训练。结合八种段式：以事物发展为序段，时间先后为序段，空间变
换为序段，总述、分述结构段，因果段、转折段，递进段，并列段。以此认识客观事
物的发生、发展规律。不论哪种段式，都是记叙事物的发展和人们对事物的认识，即
段的内容，段的中心。它和一句话一样，也是对人、事、物、景的叙述，也是表达一
个意思。只不过是把一句话进一步说得更清楚、更深刻。
（四）、篇章训练。篇是由段组成的。通过对审题、立意、选材、谋篇、定法、用
语的知识与方法，通过记叙、描写、抒情、议论四种表达方法，文章开头与结尾、过渡
与呼应方法，各种文章体裁的知识与方法。学会写中心明确，意思完整，详略得当的记
叙文和应用文。
（五）、生活现场训练。采用生活现场训练，更好地体会从内容入手写作文。通过各种作文教学活动，如确定中心讨论会、选材讨论会、作文会诊会、
小诸葛审题会、妙用词语比赛会，从活动中生动具体地学到作文知识与写作文 的方法。另外，还可开展各种校内外活动，如跳绳、拔河、踢毽、球类、背书比赛，从
而学会如何写比赛作文；开展校内外义务劳动，学会如何写劳动场面；举行诗歌朗诵、
讲演会，学会如何写会议场面及会议上的见闻；通过参观访问，浏览名胜古迹，学会如
何写参观访问记、游记。学习观察方法，留心周围的事物、事件，处处留心皆学问，
人情练达即文章。通过现场生活作文，进一步认识到：生活是作文的沃土。从而学会
写真事、抒真情，陶冶真、善、美的情操，培养良好的文风。
实行互评互改，培养学生思维独立性和创造性。学生作文写好后，组织在小组 内讲评。先学习别人作文的优点，再用批评的眼光互相指出作文中的缺点，并指出改进
意见。在此基础上重新再写，从而使学生每写一篇都有收获。
写出诚实的自己的话
写诚实的自己的话是老教育家叶圣陶先生说的。旨在营造自主作文的五彩
世界。所谓自主就是不受条条框框的限制，让学生无拘无束的思想，自由自在的写
作。自主作文就是言为心声，率性而为，展现自我的风采，体现鲜明的个性。应当脱离作文教学的陈旧方式，可以让学生在自主状态下写作，褪去矫揉造作、
模仿穿凿，赋予其鲜活的想象力，丰富的创造力，等待收获的将是缤纷的色彩，清新的
果实和勃勃的生机。
写作时，课堂上常发生这样的情况：有的学生文思枯竭，三言两语就把要说的倾倒完
了，干干瘪瘪；有的学生却思绪绵绵，脑子里如有活水，或潺潺流淌，或波澜起伏，笔下
洋洋洒洒。究其原因，与写作材料充足与否当然有密切关系，然而，切不可忽视另一重
要因素，即想象力发挥得如何。
根据近代脑生理的研究，人的大脑可分为四个功能部位，即感受部位、判断部位、储
存部位和想象部位。就多数人而言，前三个部位注意开发，想象部位比较忽视。据研究测
试，一般人只用了自身想象力的15％，潜力很大。学写作，就要重视想象力的发展。人们
说，科学是从想象开始的，如果人们不幻想能像乌一样飞，像鱼一样游，哪来今日的飞机、
潜艇?写文章也一样，发挥想象力，让思想插上双翅飞翔，就能上下求索，神游八荒，获得
分丰富的写作材料。
开展想象应选择不定向的、跳跃式的、自由自在的方式，也就是浮想联翩，不受限制地
思考。一般地说，人们思考问题常常是按一定的常规、一定的角度进行，思维的范围比较窄，
而想象却不是按部就班地思考，是不受任何拘束放开来想，思维充分发散。思维发散，头脑
中就能形成许多从来没见过的事物形象，创造出前所未有的新形象。 写作文常犯的简单错误
小学生写作文，最常犯的错误，就是作文偏题或离题。
另一个常见的毛病是文笔不好，词汇不够，如果再加上内容天马行空，胡乱写一
篇现实生活中不可能发生的事，或捣蛋、有负面影响的作文，那可就惨了。几个原因：
（1）选材不恰当：尤其是看图作文，没有照图片发挥，而是任意创作。
（2）词汇不够：形容开心的事，通篇都是开心，没有别的形容词；
（3）句子不通顺：尤其是英语式华语，例如小丽掉了课本（正确是小丽的课本掉了）。
（4）构思不完整、详略不当：开头写了一大半，来到主题中心思想时却两句话带过，
结尾更是草草了事，犯了主题不突出的毛病。
（5）观察力不够，描写不深入：例如描写弟弟顽皮，没有举例具体说明。小学作文：看图作文最容易
窍门：依照个别的图片造句，然后将个别图片的造句串连起来，加上一些连贯词汇、
描写和形容词等，便能达到基本要求。
中学作文：叙述文最易掌握
窍门：先不要考虑、担忧字数，一口气把一个人（例如我敬爱的人）、一件事（例如
我难忘的事）描述和交待清楚，只要达到文字通顺就可及格；如在内容及技巧上下功夫，
还可拿高分。
学生经常出现的错误包括抓不到重点、词汇不够、题材不够、联想力差等。应多加练习。
家长的鼓励很重要，并且要给孩子正确的信息：只要肯学，我一定能学好作文，那
么学作文的过程，必能胜任愉快。
写作常用模板
对比观点题型
（1）要求论述两个对立己的看法。
有一些人认为
另一些人认为
我的看法
The topic of ①_________________（主题）is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it. Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of ②_________________（支持A的理由一）What is more, ③_____________理由二）. Moreover, ④_______________（理由三）.
While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,_________________（支持B的理由一）. Secondly （besides）,⑥__________________（理由二）. Thirdly （finally）,⑦__________________（理由三）.
From my point of view, I think ⑧________________（我的观点）. The reason is that ⑨____________________（原因）. As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice .
（2）给出一个观点，要求考生反对这一观点
Some people believe that ①________________（观点一）. For example, they think ②_________________（举例说明）．And it will bring them ③_________________（为他们带来的好处）.
In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point. For one thing,④_____________（我不同意该看法的理由一）. For another thing, ⑤_________________（反对的理由之二）．
Form all what I have said, I agree to the thought that ⑥__________________（我对文章所讨论主题的看法）．
阐述主题题型
要求从一句话或一个主题出发，按照提纲的要求进行论述．
阐述名言或主题所蕴涵的意义．
分析并举例使其更充实．
The good old proverb ________________（名言或谚语）reminds us that ________________（释义）. Indeed, we can learn many things form it. First of all,_________________（理由一）. For example,
___________________（举例说明）. Secondly,________________（理由二）. Another case is that _______________（举例说明）. Furthermore , __________________（理由三）．
In my opinion, ________________（我的观点）. In short, whatever you do, please remember the say______A. If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, you”ll necessarily benefit a lot from it.
解决方法题型
要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径
问题现状
怎样解决（解决方案的优缺点）
In recent days, we have to face I problem_____A, which is becoming more and more serious. First, ____________（说明Ａ的现状）．Second,
_______________（举例进一步说明现状）
Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, _______________（解决方法一）. For another _____________（解决方法二）. Finally, ______________（解决方法三）. Personally, I believe that _____________（我的解决方法）. Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because ______________（带来的好处）.
议论文的框架
（1）不同观点列举型（ 选择型 ）
There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作文题目_____. But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person. A majority of people think that _ 观点一________. In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, ___原因一_______.Furthermore, in the second place, ___原因二_____. So it goes without saying that ___观点一_____.
People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter. Some people hold the idea that ___观点二_______. In their point of view, on the one hand， ___原因一_______. On the other hand, ____原因二_____. Therefore, there is no doubt that ___观点二______.
As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __观点一或二______. It is not only because ________, but also because _________. The more _______, the more _______
（2）利弊型的议论文
Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over （the issue that）___作文题目______. In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in __题目议题_____. Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive
aspects as follows. Firstly, ___优点一______. And secondly ___优点二_____. Just As a popular saying goes, \"every coin has two sides\", __讨论议题______ is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects. To begin with, ___缺点一______. In addition, ____缺点二______.
To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of __讨论议题____ into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time. In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the ____讨论议题___.
（ 3 ） 答题性议论文
Currently, there is a widespread concern over （the issue that）__作文题目_______ .It is really an important concern to every one of us. As a result, we must spare no efforts to take some measures to solve this problem. As we know that there are many steps which can be taken to undo this
problem. First of all, __途径一______. In addition, another way contributing to success of the solving problem is ___途径二_____.
Above all, to solve the problem of ___作文题目______, we should find a
number of various ways. But as far as I am concerned, I would prefer to solve
the problem in this way, that is to say, ____方法_____.
（4） 谚语警句性议论文
It is well know to us that the proverb: \" ___谚语_______\" has a profound significance and value not only in our job but also in our study. It means ____谚语的含义_______. The saying can be illustrated through a series of examples as follows. （ also theoretically ）
A case in point is ___例子一______. Therefore, it is goes without saying that it is of great of importance to practice the proverb ____谚语_____.
With the rapid development of science and technology in China, an increasing number of people come to realize that it is also of practical use to stick to the saying: ____谚语_____. The more we are aware of the significance of this famous saying, the more benefits we will get in our daily study and job.. 图表作文的框架
as is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/percentage in the table（graph/picture/pie/chart）, ___作文题目的议题_____ has been on rise/ decrease
（goesup/increases/drops/decreases）,significantly/dramatically/steadily rising/decreasing from______ in _______ to ______ in _____. From the
sharp/marked decline/ rise in the chart, it goes without saying that ________. There are at least two good reasons accounting for ______. On the one hand, ________. On the other hand, _______ is due to the fact that ________. In addition, ________ is responsible for _______. Maybe there are some other reasons to show ________. But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are .
As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that _______. I am sure my opinion is both sound and well_grounded.
英语作文写作技巧新编
一．写作要求
1. 满足题目要求，不要偏题。中规中矩好过偏题。
2. 避免拼写错误，拼写错误会让老师对你的印象急剧下降，得分非常不好。
3. 段落结构很重要，三段式的文章是很容易写的，层次清晰，也是很受阅卷老师青睐
的文章。
4. 文章句子间的衔接词很重要，能给阅卷老师以全篇有序的感觉。
5. 难句的出现能展现自己的实力，让老师找到给你高分的理由。但要适可而止，避免
错误，不要适得其反。
6. 词汇尽量丰富，避免同一个词在同一篇文章中出现多次。
二．文章内容
1. 现象描述句
Recently, with the rapid development of （industry） （最近，随着工业的发展?.In recent years, there is a sudden increase in?
A great change has taken places everywhere in the past few decades?
2. 影响分析句
There are a number of effect of?, the 1st?2nd?.3?
It may cause serious consequences.（结果）
It will give rise to a lot of problems .
3. 建议句
It would be wise to? if we want to?
How can we? without?
The most effective way to solve these problems is?
4. 逻辑功能词扩充
次序
first, second, third, first and foremost, last but not least.
原因和理由
consequently, therefore, hence, thus, as a result of ,owing to this, on account of this.
目的in order to, so as to, so that, for the purpose of补充not only? but also, （不但…而且）furthermore, in addition, moreover, what’s more, besides, as well (as),
强调和重申
above all, in fact, in particular, particularly, most importantly, especially, that is to say, in other word
对比和转折
on one hand? on the other hand,（一方面..另一方面） in contrast with, whereas(然而；鉴之，反之)，on the contrary
让步
However , nevertheless（然而，不过，虽然如此）, yet, despite this,总述和收尾
all in all, in a word, in summary, in conclusion, to sum up， on the whole,
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二．文章分析
题目：近日你所在的学校开展了“为建设节约型社会献一计”主题活动，同学们提出了许多建议。请你根据以下要点，用英语写一篇短文向English Horizons杂志编辑部投稿：有人建议
1.不浪费粮食和纸张
2.尽量不使用方便筷、塑料袋
3.毕业生将书赠给低年级同学循环使用？
Recently，there has been an activity of “doing your bit for an energy-saving society”in our school. Our schoolmates are highly concerned about the increasing lack of energy and provide their own suggestions.
Some students suggest that we shouldn’t waste any food or paper, though they appear very easy to get. Meanwhile, some other students think it advisable to
refuse to use disposable（用完即可丢弃的）chopsticks and plastic bags. Besides, it is also strongly recommended that those used textbooks as well as reference books of graduates, which are still in good condition, not be thrown but recycled. Actually, there are still quite a lot that we can easily do: try to take buses or ride bicycles instead of driving cars, etc. All of these will definitely help to build an energy-saving society.
三．实战演练
假设你是李红，你的一位美国笔友Robert写E-mail问及你高考后暑假的安排，请根据以下要点，写一封100词左右的email回复他, 可以适当增加细节。
1. 学开车 2. 参加英语培训课程 3. 去北京看奥运会 4. 游览北京的名胜
注意：1.根据以上内容写一篇短文，不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。
2.要准确使用语法和词汇；使用一定的句型、词汇，清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思；3. 词数：100个左右。开头已给出，不计入词数。
范文 (One possible version)
Dear Robert:
How time flies! The happy days we shared often shines in my memory. What about you?
As you know, my college entrance exam is approaching, which also announces the end of this sort of pressing study life. However，I intend to have a meaningful summer vacation. First, I will learn to drive to get a driving license, which is a new activity for a high school graduate in China. I will have a good rest, enjoying my hobbies. Then I will take some English courses to improve my English
communication ability, With the 2008 Olympics beginning, I will be a participant of it, watching the basketball match between China and the US. I have been
dreaming of Kobe’s performance long. After that, I will pay a visit to some tourist attractions to widen my horizon.
That is the plan for my vacation. I am looking forward to being told about your arrangements of vacation. Give me your quick reply soon, OK?
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